Post by Cookie on Aug 31, 2017 5:36:18 GMT -6
This is an idea I've had in my head for a while now, and I'm planning on making it into a comic, hopefully soon. Just need to get the rest of the story details figured out, and maybe I can start the comic. For now, I just decided to write up a little short story about the beginning of Charlotte's little journey. This is more like a draft, and I might make changes to it when I actually make the comic. also forgive my terrible writing skills
Also if anyone has a better title than "Fantasy Koala" PLEASEEEE let me know i can't make good titles to save my life
"Gooooood morning Maple town!~" Charlotte, koala wearing a pink cloak opens the door and steps outside, only to see the whole town of animals screaming and running around like headless chickens. "Hm." Charlotte looks around. "Maybe there's a party." She casually walked around the town amidst the chaos. I must say this is a pretty weird party... She thought. She spotted a large crowd around the castle. "OOoh! I wonder what's going on over there!" She curiously skips over to see what the fuss is about. She weaves her way through the crowd and sees a wolf guard trying to calm the crowd. "Hey Mr. guard!" She says. "What's going on? Is this a party? Because this is a pretty weird party!" She laughs.
The guard sighs. "Sorry kid, no party." The expression on Charlotte's face changes to a much sadder one. "Besides if there was one, I'm pretty sure all the guards would be drunk by now.." He mutters then coughs. "Anyway this morning we found the two guards guarding the Queen's room on the ground unconscious, and they were probably attacked, and the Queen is missing."
Charlotte gasps. "Missing?!? SHE WAS KIDNAPPED?!? By who?"
"Well the kingdom really only has one sworn enemy, so it was probably the evil bunny king, he's always doing something annoying to seek attention, but I never thought that idiot was capable of kidnappin-"
"I SHALL SAVE THE QUEEN!" Charlotte suddenly announced, and the crowd immediately went silent.
"Excuse me, WHAT?!"
"I, Charlotte have decided to go on a heroic quest, to venture to the Evil Bunny Kingdom, to save Queen Banana Bunny!"
"Um I really think you should leave this to the professionals-"
"I shall become a hero, and save us all!" Charlotte says. The crowd starts cheering. "THANK YOU! I'LL GET SUPPLIES!" She runs to her house.
The guard just stood there in complete shock. Years of military school.... for this. He thought. Well atleast she probably has responsible parents.
Charlotte ran into the house and went upstairs and starting packing her things in a tiny bag- which was enchanted so it could hold like a ton of stuff, so don't be surprised if she ends up pulling an umbrella out of it at some point. She finished packing and ran downstairs. "Hey grandma, is it okay if I go on a journey to save Queen Banana bunny from the Evil Bunny King?" She asks. Her grandma, who was experimenting with potions didn't look up from what she was doing and just said
"Sure, whatever." she tossed a little bag over to Charlotte. "Take these little bombs, you'll need to defend yourself."
Charlotte caught the bombs. "Okay!" She runs out the door. "THANK YOU! I'LL BE BACK IN A COUPLE OF DAYS!"
Shird, a strange, small bird that had some shark features, who was basically the grandma's pet, preferring the term companion just looked over to his master in absolute shock. "What the heck was that?! You didn't even look up, just throw her a bag of bombs and send her on her way?! What is wrong with you?!"
"What, you want to go with her?" She says dryly.
"Yes, I'm going with her! She'll probably get killed out there by herself!" Shird says.
"Fine, go with her, help her." She looks at Shird. "Maybe it would be your chance to redeem yourself." She says coldly.
That sent shivers down his spine. "F-fine! I'll go with her!" He says, then flew out the window, after Charlotte.
"Hey, wait up!"
Well goodnight. I gotta go to bed now, so I'm gonna have to post this without proof reading, so maybe I'll fix any errors tomorrow.
So uh.. tell me what you think of this as a beginning for a story.
Also if anyone has a better title than "Fantasy Koala" PLEASEEEE let me know i can't make good titles to save my life
"Gooooood morning Maple town!~" Charlotte, koala wearing a pink cloak opens the door and steps outside, only to see the whole town of animals screaming and running around like headless chickens. "Hm." Charlotte looks around. "Maybe there's a party." She casually walked around the town amidst the chaos. I must say this is a pretty weird party... She thought. She spotted a large crowd around the castle. "OOoh! I wonder what's going on over there!" She curiously skips over to see what the fuss is about. She weaves her way through the crowd and sees a wolf guard trying to calm the crowd. "Hey Mr. guard!" She says. "What's going on? Is this a party? Because this is a pretty weird party!" She laughs.
The guard sighs. "Sorry kid, no party." The expression on Charlotte's face changes to a much sadder one. "Besides if there was one, I'm pretty sure all the guards would be drunk by now.." He mutters then coughs. "Anyway this morning we found the two guards guarding the Queen's room on the ground unconscious, and they were probably attacked, and the Queen is missing."
Charlotte gasps. "Missing?!? SHE WAS KIDNAPPED?!? By who?"
"Well the kingdom really only has one sworn enemy, so it was probably the evil bunny king, he's always doing something annoying to seek attention, but I never thought that idiot was capable of kidnappin-"
"I SHALL SAVE THE QUEEN!" Charlotte suddenly announced, and the crowd immediately went silent.
"Excuse me, WHAT?!"
"I, Charlotte have decided to go on a heroic quest, to venture to the Evil Bunny Kingdom, to save Queen Banana Bunny!"
"Um I really think you should leave this to the professionals-"
"I shall become a hero, and save us all!" Charlotte says. The crowd starts cheering. "THANK YOU! I'LL GET SUPPLIES!" She runs to her house.
The guard just stood there in complete shock. Years of military school.... for this. He thought. Well atleast she probably has responsible parents.
Charlotte ran into the house and went upstairs and starting packing her things in a tiny bag- which was enchanted so it could hold like a ton of stuff, so don't be surprised if she ends up pulling an umbrella out of it at some point. She finished packing and ran downstairs. "Hey grandma, is it okay if I go on a journey to save Queen Banana bunny from the Evil Bunny King?" She asks. Her grandma, who was experimenting with potions didn't look up from what she was doing and just said
"Sure, whatever." she tossed a little bag over to Charlotte. "Take these little bombs, you'll need to defend yourself."
Charlotte caught the bombs. "Okay!" She runs out the door. "THANK YOU! I'LL BE BACK IN A COUPLE OF DAYS!"
Shird, a strange, small bird that had some shark features, who was basically the grandma's pet, preferring the term companion just looked over to his master in absolute shock. "What the heck was that?! You didn't even look up, just throw her a bag of bombs and send her on her way?! What is wrong with you?!"
"What, you want to go with her?" She says dryly.
"Yes, I'm going with her! She'll probably get killed out there by herself!" Shird says.
"Fine, go with her, help her." She looks at Shird. "Maybe it would be your chance to redeem yourself." She says coldly.
That sent shivers down his spine. "F-fine! I'll go with her!" He says, then flew out the window, after Charlotte.
"Hey, wait up!"
Well goodnight. I gotta go to bed now, so I'm gonna have to post this without proof reading, so maybe I'll fix any errors tomorrow.
So uh.. tell me what you think of this as a beginning for a story.