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Post by Cookie on Jan 21, 2018 3:33:18 GMT -6
I'm kinda stealing from Jackie by having a little planning page thing for my comic. I post the actual pages here, as well as on my deviant artSo I guess here I can talk about the characters, ideas for jokes and stories, and WIP pages. I'll try not to spoil the main plot here though. All that's in a notepad document. thoughihavenoideahowtowriteastoryandtheplotisn'tthatgoodanyway
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Post by Cookie on Jan 21, 2018 3:38:29 GMT -6
So here's a wip for page 15. It was supposed to be the third page of the last batch but it wasn't finished because I was planning on going hiatus, and I thought that page 14 would be a better page to leave off on. and I was lazyThis is actually kinda loosely based on a scene from OK KO. I dunno if I was actually thinking much about it while I was making this though. I think it was just a subconscious thing : P KO's actually one of the influences for Charlotte's character, both having a strong desire to be a hero, as well as season 1 Steven and a 10 year old Star Butterfly.
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Post by Cookie on Jan 21, 2018 3:52:27 GMT -6
I don't think I've actually mentioned Charlotte's name once in the comic. Oops. Eh, I'll see if there's an appropriate way to name drop her in the next few pages once I start working on them again.
Meanwhile I don't even know what the names for the Queen and the Evil Bunny King are yet.
Originally, the Queen was supposed to be Princess Banana Bunny, but I thought it was too silly, even for the tone of the comic, and The Evil Bunny King's real name used to be Burnt Toast, but I decided against it because that's just plain mean spirited. also i'm pretty sure toasters weren't even a thing in the time this comic's set in
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Post by Cookie on Jan 21, 2018 4:44:31 GMT -6
Spoilers I guess? Not really though? Just a kinda vague hint The end of chapter 4 is basically the end of SU's Jail break "WHAT THE FRICK JUST HAPPENED"
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Post by Cookie on Jan 23, 2018 23:59:56 GMT -6
I only have until the start of Chapter 5 all planned out. Luckily, I still had PLENTY of time until chapter 5 to plan.
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Post by Cookie on Jan 24, 2018 0:04:16 GMT -6
A mistake I made was I had the door to Charlotte's house open outwards, instead of inwards. Now I could just fix it in later pages, but nope, I'm gonna keep it like that now because there's an opportunity for some hilarious interactions with the way Charlotte swings the door open.
Like someone could just be knocking on the door- -Knock knock- Hello? -Suddenly the door slams them in the face- OW WHAT THE HELL
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Post by Cookie on Jan 24, 2018 0:16:02 GMT -6
Honestly I'm not sure if anyone's gonna care about slight spoilers for FK but... The main plot revolves around an evil crown.
Wow I'm soooooo original I know.
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Post by Raburin on Jan 24, 2018 0:43:57 GMT -6
You know there's something you should know, so now I'm gonna tell you so
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Jackie-san
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Post by Jackie-san on Jan 24, 2018 0:57:37 GMT -6
Dangit lovelin
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Post by Cookie on Jan 24, 2018 1:03:47 GMT -6
EXACTLY
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Post by Cookie on Jan 24, 2018 1:09:11 GMT -6
The Evil Bunny King has a future of being a micro transactions shop owner
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Post by Cookie on Feb 10, 2018 18:23:24 GMT -6
I wanna continue this, but my desktop isn't working, and I don't really want to make them on my laptop because
A: I don't really have another table I can set it on, so I've been only doing small things, because I've been using the laptop on my lap. B: The smaller screen makes it hard to draw
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Post by Cookie on Feb 10, 2018 18:31:43 GMT -6
I'm doing a "concept page" in my sketch book and I'm basically ripping off OK KO here RIP
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Post by Cookie on Feb 10, 2018 18:43:14 GMT -6
Charlotte starts playing with bombs
WHAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG
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Post by Cookie on Feb 12, 2018 4:16:14 GMT -6
WIP for page 16 I worked on at school: (Some of the dialogue written is for the next page) I know the situation isn't entirely original, but I wanted to see it with my own characters so...
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