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Post by Cookie on Nov 25, 2017 21:36:56 GMT -6
So here I'm gonna be posting pages of my comic, which I'm also posting on my Deviant artI'm planning on releasing it in December, but I wanna post some pages early here, incase you guys are interested. Also Fantasy Koala is just a placeholder name, until I come up with something better..
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Post by Cookie on Nov 26, 2017 3:26:18 GMT -6
The prologue! I'll be putting the pages in spoiler tags, to save space.
So uh... tell me what you think?
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Post by Mystery on Nov 28, 2017 16:48:53 GMT -6
The main character is so cute! The art style is really great as well! I love it so far! As far as story, maybe you could give a bit more of an intro to the koala before getting into the action? Because I don't even know his/her name. Or gender. As far as I can tell, they're the ruler of a kingdom and the grey bunny is the enemy. Or you'll go into it later. I don't know. But I like it!
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Post by Cookie on Nov 28, 2017 23:31:24 GMT -6
Thanks! And those pages were just a prologue, and in the next page, our main character, Charlotte is introduced. And the first little arc is actually going to be more chill. It starts off with the common 'oh no the princess (but in this comic it's a queen) has been kidnapped! Lets save her!" plotline. And it's actually a short arc, mainly to introduce our characters, and then the plot main begins.
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Post by Mystery on Nov 29, 2017 16:46:43 GMT -6
Oh, that sounds cool! I can't wait to see it!
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Post by Cookie on Dec 2, 2017 3:22:12 GMT -6
Alright, here the actual start to the chapter: PROTAGONIST MODE, ACTIVATE! But I'm wondering, are the towns animals too unlikable here? Little Kingdom is supposed to be like a very small kingdom, where most of the towns peoples are complete idiots, (But the Queen, and some other people are smart) but I don't really want them to always be straight up jerks, but their Queen just got kidnapped, so they've all gone completely insane here.
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Post by Mystery on Dec 4, 2017 14:13:02 GMT -6
I don’t think they’re jerks, but I haven’t really met them yet. But I like it so far!
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Post by Moon the Best Anime Waifu on Dec 5, 2017 23:07:31 GMT -6
sorry for being nitpicky, but you spelled anarchy wrong. Also, i don't think the animals are being mean, its kinda like someone kidnapping the president, of course they'd be scared lol.
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Post by Cookie on Dec 5, 2017 23:24:01 GMT -6
Alright, I'll make sure to fix that when I actually post it on my DA.
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Post by Cookie on Dec 21, 2017 2:24:03 GMT -6
I've actually started posting the pages on my DA now! But I'll still post the pages here as well. Honestly... not my favourite bunch of pages. The pacing could of been better.
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Post by Claw on Dec 23, 2017 21:27:01 GMT -6
I'ma loving this comic so far. uwu
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Post by Cookie on Dec 23, 2017 22:50:52 GMT -6
Thanks!
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Post by Claw on Dec 24, 2017 8:09:19 GMT -6
You're welcome :3
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Post by Cookie on Jan 9, 2018 2:07:51 GMT -6
I keep forgetting to put them on here oops
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Post by Claw on Jan 11, 2018 18:43:24 GMT -6
cute lil' shird
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