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Post by Jackie-san on Mar 8, 2017 0:40:03 GMT -6
YOU DON'T GET A SAY IN THIS
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Post by Jackie-san on Mar 23, 2017 0:50:29 GMT -6
All right, chapter 5, let's boogie!
Also, i'm time-skipping the meet with the professor, as i'm not fond of using characters that don't belong to me (Except for pokemon), and it would be a long conversation XD ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Evelyn and valerie walked along the dirt path. They had just left the professors lab, and gotten their island trial amulets. Although Valerie wasn't going to take the challenge, she would still need the amulet to pass through the trial gates. The professor was... An interesting guy. Evelyn thought he was kind of weird, but Valerie had assured her that the professor always acts like that.
Rotom hovered beside them. Before the group had left, the professor had given Evelyn one more thing. A PokeDex. Evelyn wondered why it was shaped like that, and the professor had instructed Rotom to go inside it. Rotom listened, and much to Valerie and Evelyn's surprise, the PokeDex activated. The professor explained that the PokeDex was made to be Rotom-Powered. And because Evelyn had a Rotom, and they were new to Alola, the professor had decided to give it to her. Rotom seemed to be happy that he could now help Evelyn and Valerie in another way instead of battling. He figured it would be a good learning experience for them both; and the PokeDex was also very easy to use! Heck, Rotom wouldn't be surprised if a baby pokemon learned how to use it!
So everything was going perfectly for Evelyn, Valerie and Rotom.
Until they arrived in the city.
The trio continued down the path, until they entered Hau'Oli city. It was much busier than it was yesterday. People were running around frantically. Evelyn figured that they were just running late to work or something. Then something caught her eye. She looked down towards the beachfront, and saw a Sableye and a Deino, and two rockruff. The Sableye and Deino seemed to be arguing with the rockruff. Then, the Sableye leaped at one of the Rockruff, catching it by surprise. The ghost pokemon scratched the Rockruff's face. Then, a fight broke out.
Evelyn ran down to where the fight was taking place, Rotom and Valerie tagging along close behind.
"Evelyn, where are you going?" Valerie shouted.
Evelyn ignored her. Her attention was on the fight. "Hey, break it up!" She yelled.
The four fighting pokemon stopped, and looked at her, confused. The Deino had a few scratch marks on it's body, the Sableye had a scar along it's left arm, the Rockruff that the Sableye has attacked had a few scratches on it's face, and the other Rockruff was seemingly uninjured.
Evelyn looked at Rotom, who looked quite nervous. Deino and Sableye were both dark types. Ghosts were weak to dark types. Dark types scared Rotom. "Rotom, what kind of pokemon are they?"
Rotom read out the 'Dex entries, and Evelyn nodded a thanks. She knelt down to the pokemon, and smiled. "Care to tell me what you're fighting about?"
The Sableye walked foward, and pointed a finger at the Rockruff he had attacked. "That guy and his gang of no-gooders drove me and my friend out of our cave!"
The Rockruff growled.
The Deino snorted.
The other Rockruff whined.
"Do you know why they drove you out?" Evelyn asked.
The Sableye shook his head. "It just happened. And we were outnumbered."
The Rockruff began yapping.
"He said that he did no such thing, and that this guy is making up lies." Rotom translated.
The Sableye growled, and bared his teeth at the Rockruff.
Evelyn was confused. She had absolutely no idea how to deal with this. "Well... Why don't you go find a new home, then?"
Sableye shook his head. "Ten carat hill is where all the good jewels are... I worked really hard on those tunnels down there, y'know!"
Evelyn nodded. "I understand. Your species eats jewels." She stood up. "But I still don't understand why they drove you out..."
The second Rockruff, began to bark.
"She said, that her friend was told by a Hakamo-o, that the Sableye and Deino would try to drive them out first." Rotom translated again.
"Hakamo-o!" Sableye screeched. "I knew that guy was always up to know good!"
"Sounds like you heard a rumor." Evelyn said to the Rockruff.
The Rockruff that Sableye had attacked hung his head in shame.
Evelyn put a hand on his head, and pet him gently. "It's fine, 'lil guy." The girl smiled. "I'm sure they'll forgive you." She glanced over at the Sableye and Deino.
Sableye nodded. "It's all cool. Hakamo-o is a dirty liar and everyone knows it."
Deino grunted in agreement.
The two Rockruff seemed happy that they had been forgiven for their mistake.
Evelyn waked a goodbye, and began to walk back to Valerie, but when she looked back, she noticed that the Rockruff had followed her. She turned around, and knelt down to the Rockruff. Valerie walked over, and joined her.
"I think they like you." Rotom said.
The other Rockruff, the female, walked over to Valerie, nuzzling her leg. Valerie giggled. "I think you're right!"
Evelyn pet the male Rockruff's head. She suddenly got an idea. She pulled a spare pokeball out of her pocket, and held it up to the rockruff. "Would you like to come with us, little buddy?"
The Rockruff barked happily, before pushing the button with his paw and going inside the pokeball. A few seconds later, the pokeball clicked.
Valerie did the same with the female Rockruff, and she went inside without hesitation.
The Sableye and Deino watched from a distance, interest in their eyes.
"Hey, Dei?" The Sableye said, looking at the Deino.
"Yes?" The Deino responded.
"These two seem interesting. I say we keep an eye on them. For now..."
Deino nodded in agreement.
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05's eye's landed on the Klink. Something about it just... Appealed to him more than the other two. Light smiled, and handed 05 Klink's pokeball.
"I think you two will make a great pair." She said.
"You really think so?" 05 asked, clutching the pokeball as if it were the most important thing in the world.
Light nodded. "I know so. Come on, it's time to begin your journey." She said, leading 05 and his new Klink out of the room. She lead him towards the elevator that lead to the entrance level, and took him outside.
05 returned his klink. He looked up at the sky. He hadn't seen it in a while... The sun kinda hurt his eyes. He heard a roar, and jumped back in surprise when a Charizard landed in front of him.
Light helped 05 up onto the pokemon, before jumping on herself. "Please, take us to Hau'Oli city. MeleMele island."
The Charizard nodded, before taking to the skies. 05 Looked down. It was a very long way down. But the view was beautiful. The water was sparkling in the sunlight.
As Charizard flew, he looked at the Pokeball that contained Klink. He decided to try come up with a nickname for it.
The problem, however, is that he's terrible at coming up with nicknames. He thought for a very long time. And even longer. And even longer than that very short period of longer thinking.
He finally thought of a name that he liked.
"I'm going to call you Sparky."
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Clara walked into the pokemon center on route two, her Frogadier following close behind. The girl walked up to the counter, and placed a pokeball on it. "My Banette isn't feeling too well. Could you please look after it for me?" Clara asked nurse Joy.
Nurse Joy nodded. "Of course." She took the pokeball, and disappeared into another room. She returned a few moments later.
"One more thing, Joy." Clara said. "May I please book a room here for the night?"
"Sure you can." Nurse Joy responded kindly, handing Clara a room key. "Please enjoy your stay, your Bannete should be better in the morning."
"Thank you Joy." Clara said, before walking off to her room. Once she was inside, she took off her bag and placed it on the bed. She rummaged around in it for a bit, before finally pulling out a black radio. She put it on the stand next to the bed. She then pulled out a piece of paper and a pen, and scribbled some stuff down on the paper. She rolled it up like a scroll, and looked at her Frogadier.
"Nightick, could you please take this to Jake?" She asked. The Frogadier, who's nickname turned out to be Nightick, took the letter, and jumped out the window.
"Make sure he gets it by dawn tomorrow, or the plan will be busted!" Clara shouted after him. Nightick nodded, before running off at an amazing speed.
Clara flopped down onto the bed and stared at the ceiling. It had been a long day... Perhaps she could relax tomorrow. But then again, whenever someone from her group gets paired with Jake of all people, things tend to get out of hand. Especially since Jake, was, well...
A scaredy-cat. Jake was a scaredy-cat. The only reason the boss had allowed him to join the group, is because everyone felt sorry for the kid. He had nowhere to go, and he was terrified of pokemon. Clara decided to be Jake's personal guide. The two were now best friends, and Clara could never stop worrying about him. Especially if she was away on a mission. She knew that the other people in her group didn't really... Enjoy. Having Jake around. He was screaming in fear almost every five minutes.
But he was a nice guy. And Clara appreciated that. Most of the other people in her group were quite rude, and didn't really like nice kids. Clara looked over to her radio, as a static noise began to come from it. Clara reached over and grabbed the device, pushing a green button on it.
"zzrtt... Base to Moon. I repeat, base to Moon."
"Agent Moon to base. What's up?"
"Beast activity on Akala island. Wela volcano park. We suspect that it may be what the Aether Foundation refers to as: "Ub-01"."
"I'll go check it out once i've finished my MeleMele grand trial."
"Very well. Good luck Moon."
"Thanks. I'll probably need it."
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Sorry for another short chapter! I kinda just want to work on character development right now, but I promise you! The chapters will get longer! I just need time XD
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 9, 2017 6:10:43 GMT -6
Continuing this, but i'm going to time skip to where all the action begins, seeing as the rest is just proceeding with the island trials as usual.
Evelyn's team: Rotom - No nickname - male Lycanroc midnight - Midnii - female Morelull - Lumi - female Sableye - Jack -male Pyukumuku - Pookie - male Lurantis - Mantra - female
Valeries team: Primarina - Claire - female Pidgeot - Alex - male Hydreigon - Hydra - Male Lycanroc daytime - Rocky - Female Kommo-o - Momo - male Vikavolt - Sparky - Female
I'll start tomorrow XD
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 9, 2017 6:43:46 GMT -6
Preview
Hau'oli city, 12:54 am
Evelyn ran down the street as fast as she could, Rotom following close behind. Evelyn's heart pounded in her chest, but she kept running. The ultra beast following them came to a sudden halt. A thunderbolt came out of nowhere, and struck the Nihilego down with ease.
Ever since the Aether Foundation opened the wormholes, brainwashed the guardian deities and kidnapped Cosmog... Everything's been going wrong.
Evelyn and Rotom ran into an abandoned building, panting.
"It's Jhoto all over again... But worse..." Evelyn muttered, looking out the window. The sky was covered in grey clouds, thunder and lighting clashed and rain was beginning to fall.
"I'm scared..." Rotom whimpered. "We all are, buddy..." Evelyn responded. She pressed her hand against the window. "oh arceus... Would this have happened if Tiger were here?"
Silence in the room.
"It was my fault.." Rotom said in a hoarse whisper. Evelyn turned and looked at him. "what're you talking about?"
"None of this would've happened if I had took down that gengar when I had the chance!" Rotom cried. " I'm weak, and now Cosmog is... cosmog is going to..." tears began streaming down the little ghosts face.
Evelyn pulled Rotom towards her. "Buddy, it's not your fault... You're not weak... We'll fix this, you just wait and see."
Rotom smiled slightly. "Thanks... You always know how to make me feel better."
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Post by TheNinjaCyndaquil on Jun 10, 2017 1:46:01 GMT -6
would this happen if Tiger were here....eh he might have bad luck when it comes to Ho-Oh, but I think he'd find a way to try and stop the wormholes XD
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 10, 2017 15:36:56 GMT -6
XD
oh boy do I have one heck of a mess planned for these guys to clean up XD
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Post by TheNinjaCyndaquil on Jun 10, 2017 16:01:06 GMT -6
Can't wait for Tiger to go then. I'm planning on him being a trainer that is helping Looker investigate the troubles in Unova. He will be wearing a disguise when he first appears in Unova. Though he will admit to being himself later on.
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 10, 2017 16:06:18 GMT -6
Ooh nice!
I'm planning on having Oliver catch Unown at the end of the kanto part, and have them both go to unova.
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Post by TheNinjaCyndaquil on Jun 10, 2017 16:08:04 GMT -6
alright. I'm planning on posting the end of Unova to Tiger's path on the planning page.
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 10, 2017 16:16:50 GMT -6
Ok
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Post by Jackie-san on Jun 13, 2017 3:50:47 GMT -6
Quick little chapter before I go to bed ^^ ---------- Chapter Rotom, Claire, Jack and Alex were all hiding in the abandoned building together. Cosmog (just say that this is the sun universe, the Cosmog that got captured by the aether foundation was Solgaleo. This one is lunala), and the unconscious, and badly beaten Ultra beast that had saved them were close by. "This is bad..." Alex murmured. "very bad. Hey, Rotom, will you stop pacing for ONE second and help us THINK OF SOMETHING?" Rotom, who had been pacing back and fourth across the room, turned and looked at Alex, an unreadable expression on his face. "We can't hide in here forever." He said, ignoring Alex. "We'll need to go back out there at some point. at least we know what we're up against now." "But Rotom, your wing-" Claire began to protest, but was cut off. "My wing is fine, Claire." "But that blast..." "That blast was nothing compared to the pain our saviour must be in right now." All the pokemon in the room turned and looked at the Xurkitree Cosmog was watching over. "He's stable." The little cloud spoke. her voice was but a whisper. "But if he doesn't get proper treatment soon..." Silence in the room. "Rotom's right." Jack said, leaning against a wall. "we need to go back out there and fight like there's no tomorrow." "Thats just it, guys!" Alex chirped. "if this keeps up, there won't BE, A TOMORROW!" "Alex." Claire spoke. "calm down. We'll get through this. Together." Cosmog looked over at the four pokemon. "I'll help you in any way I can. I need... I need to help my brother.." she said, tears forming In the corner of her eyes. Alex sighed. "Fine. But only because I'd rather die a hero than a Turkey. "It's settled then." Rotom said. "we'll rest for a bit longer, and then go back out there. With a better battle plan." Claire looked at Rotom. The primarina sighed. He's changed alot since Jhoto... He isnt the cowardly, childish pokemon i knew back then... He's stronger, more grown up...
I miss the old rotom.
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Post by Jackie-san on Aug 5, 2017 6:07:21 GMT -6
Okay, this may be the last thing I post on here, but I might post more.
I'm planning on having this be the first thing the others see when they arrive in Alola
Oh, and in case you guys get confused, I'm having it so that Oliver went ahead of the others to Alola, and met up with Evelyn and her team. Oliver is completely unaware that Evelyn knows Tiger and the others though. ----------------
A streak of blue electricity flew around the guardian deity and ultra beast at incredible speeds, but the guardian of melemele island was faster, and struck down the Rotom with a thunderbolt at least 100 times stronger than the little ghosts. Rotom skidded across the sand. the little ghost layed on the sand, motionless. An Unown shot a hidden power at the Pheromosa, but it casually stepped to the side, spun around, and used bug Buzz, which greatly damaged the Unown due to its psychic typing. the pokemon was blasted out of the sky by a thunderbolt from the Tapu Koko, but before it could hit the ground, a human rushed out from behind a pile of rocks and caught him. the boy then quickly ran back to his hiding place, without being seen the the other two.
Now it was just Evelyn, Jack the sableye, Lumi the Morelull, Pookie the Pyukumuku, Luka the Midnight Lycanroc, and Mantra the Lurantis vs Tapu koko, guardian of melemele island, and a Pheromosa, Ub-02.
Evelyn stood her ground. her heart was thumping in her chest. She NEEDED to break Tapu koko out of the mind control, but she couldn't do that without breaking his pokeball, which was no where to be found. Valerie was helping out on Akala island at the moment, so that just left her, and a boy she'd met the previous day named Oliver. She'd run in to him in Iki town, where she saw his Unown having a fit of some sorts. After Oliver explained that it was a side effect of a permanent brainwashing, she didn't even know if she Wanted to break Tapu koko out of it, if it would cause him suffering. but then we thought that the Unown and Tapu koko were two seperate cases, and that snapping the guardian deities out of their trance was top priority.
But it's kinda difficult to do that when hundreds of ultra beasts running about.
And Evelyn herself looked horrid. Her clothes were covered in scorch marks, there were untreated cuts and bruises all over her body, her chocolate brown hair was matted and looked like a mop, and there were dark bags under her eyes. She, and almost everyone else, were battered and bruised, but they refused to give up. Evelyn was sick of running away when people needed her most. This would not end up like Jhoto. She didn't need anyone but her close friends. Maybe after all this was over, she'd go back to Jhoto and apologise to everyone for running away.
She was the first champion of Alola now, and she wasn't going to disappoint.
"Jack, power gem! Mantra, go get Rotom, Oliver and Unown. Get them all to safety, and make sure their wounds get healed! Luka, stone edge! Lumi, we need a distraction! use Flash!" Evelyn commanded.
Lumi jumped in front of the two opposing pokemon and used flash. this caught the two off guard, and they were temporarily blinded. meanwhile, the other three got to work. Jack and Luka landed successful hits on koko and Pheromosa, and the two took huge damage. meanwhile, Mantra got Oliver, Rotom and Unown to a safe place on the other side of the beach, and began to treat their wounds.
"We're gonna win this." Evelyn said to herself. She kept repeating it, over and over, watching her pokemon and the two legends tussle back and fourth, until eventually, Pheromosa went down. unfortunately, Jack went down with it.
Now it was 3 vs Tapu Koko.
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Well, I can just imagine everyone else walking down to the beach and seeing this and being like "wtf is happening"
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Post by TheNinjaCyndaquil on Aug 6, 2017 0:44:51 GMT -6
Same here, great story. Now I can't wait to get through Unova.
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Post by Jackie-san on Aug 6, 2017 1:07:08 GMT -6
Yeah, i was hoping that after Unova, they could go to Alola. I kinda want Evelyn back for the Sinnoh region XD
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Post by TheNinjaCyndaquil on Aug 6, 2017 10:09:35 GMT -6
Yeah I'll make sure we go to Alola next, (Unova won't take super long if we keep it active)
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